A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words

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Dear Karan, It's so great to hear from you! Thanks for your invitation to

come

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visit you

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Toronto

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fall. I would be delighted if you could suggest me few gift options for your parents as I was planning to give them something special.

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, I was thinking to buy a lovely Indian dress for your mother and traditional shoes for your father. Do you think they would like it?

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, I wanted to ask you if there are any interesting

sight-seeing

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options in Toronto or any activities as

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. Plus, I've checked the weather forecast, please advise me as to what

apparels

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should I carry? I want to follow the current trend there and gel with the crowd. Another thing is that I want to try everything to eat there as you know that I'm a food buff. From authentic street food to luxurious

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dishes; I want to try it all and I want you to accompany me everywhere because I'm only coming for a week's time. Looking forward to seeing you soon Warmest regards, Rahul.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

180 words

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