A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words

Dear Karan, It's so great to hear from you! Thanks for your invitation to
come
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tocome

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visit you
to
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in

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Toronto
this
fall. I would be delighted if you could suggest me few gift options for your parents as I was planning to give them something special.
Initially
, I was thinking to buy a lovely Indian dress for your mother and traditional shoes for your father. Do you think they would like it?
Also
, I wanted to ask you if there are any interesting
sight-seeing
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sightseeing

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options in Toronto or any activities as
such
. Plus, I've checked the weather forecast, please advise me as to what
apparels
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apparel

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should I carry? I want to follow the current trend there and gel with the crowd. Another thing is that I want to try everything to eat there as you know that I'm a food buff. From authentic street food to luxurious
five star
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five-star

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dishes; I want to try it all and I want you to accompany me everywhere because I'm only coming for a week's time. Looking forward to seeing you soon Warmest regards, Rahul.
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