Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe, that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In order to be a better member of the society whether the

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should be responsible or the

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has been debatable always. In my

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both play an equal inevitable role. It is considered that not only

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are a child's

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guardian, but

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teachers

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the looks inherited, the habits, behaviour and etiquette are

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transferred.

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,

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need to teach

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for being

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of all, to respect the elderly. To greet everyone with a smile, so that they feel

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, to help each other whenever in need.

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not only builds a helping nature but spreads joy to both the

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and receiver.

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highest education should be acquired.

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tends to

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job and handsome income, which makes the child even more confident and responsible; making both family and society a better place to live in.

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, schools have their own part.

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often spend seven to eight hours in

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. The atmosphere in

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surrounded by

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and friends has a great influence on

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. Each morning starts with a prayer followed by a uniform and hygiene check.

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is to maintain health and to have faith in God. Discipline and punctuality are priorities in

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education ,

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focus on enhancing creativity in kids.

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, inculcating an interest in some art which in future might be chosen as a profession.

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,

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of sincerity and honesty is taught. Sincerity is appreciated by schools in the form of certificates and trophies awarded to hardworking pupils. And, honesty in apologizing for mistakes. To sum up, not only

parents

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build a good society member out of

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but an equal, dependent and unavoidable role is played by

teachers

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as well.