In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of Crime? How can we deal with those causes?

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recent years,

crime

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rate has climbed up in many nations. In my opinion, I agree with the statement, and in the coming essay, both root causes and potential preventions will be discussed. To start with,

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illiteracy

and unemployment are the most

influencial

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influential

reasons to attempt a

crime

by a

person

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, due to less education and without a job, youth most of the time

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forced to do the

crime

in order to earn

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bread or impress others.

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research on

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psychology

of

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criminals and concluded that 85% of

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are either lack

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education or without

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at the time when criminals attempted the

crime

.

Therefore

, the two factors have gigantic effects on a

person

's thoughts.

On the other hand

, one way to restrict the rule breakers is to improve the hardness of

crime

punishment and strict the laws, and the

second

method is to provide entrepreneurship skills or jobs for the unemployed youth. As

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fear of the punishment may stop a

person

to involve in the

crime

.

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, in South Arabia, both hands can be cut

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a thief if he or she has found guilty.

Consequently

, there are

miniscule

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minuscule

law breaks in

this

country.

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employed

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the employed

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person

will not have thought and intention to

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unnecessary

trap himself or herself for any criminal activities. In conclusion,

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due to

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in

unemployment

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the unemployment

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rate is the main reason to elevate the

crime

rate,

however

, strict law

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and skills

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enrichment

to

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can reduce the

numer

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number

of law breaks.