In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of Crime? How can we deal with those causes?

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recent years,
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rate has climbed up in many nations. In my opinion, I agree with the statement, and in the coming essay, both root causes and potential preventions will be discussed. To start with,
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illiteracy
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influential
reasons to attempt a
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by a
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, due to less education and without a job, youth most of the time
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forced to do the
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in order to earn
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bread or impress others.
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, Oxford University has done
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research on
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psychology
of
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criminals and concluded that 85% of
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are either lack
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education or without
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at the time when criminals attempted the
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, the two factors have gigantic effects on a
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's thoughts.
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, one way to restrict the rule breakers is to improve the hardness of
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punishment and strict the laws, and the
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method is to provide entrepreneurship skills or jobs for the unemployed youth. As
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fear of the punishment may stop a
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to involve in the
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a thief if he or she has found guilty.
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, there are
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minuscule
law breaks in
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country.
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employed
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person
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will not have thought and intention to
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unnecessary
trap himself or herself for any criminal activities. In conclusion,
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in
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rate is the main reason to elevate the
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rate,
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, strict law
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and skills
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enrichment
to
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can reduce the
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number
of law breaks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic disparity
  • propensity
  • recidivism
  • deterrent
  • rehabilitative
  • judicial system
  • corruption
  • socioeconomic
  • alienation
  • stigmatization
  • decriminalization
  • enforcement
  • gentrification
  • preemptive measures
  • intervention strategies
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