Many teenagers now have their own Smart phone. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, a large number of

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. While mobile

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can lead to

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them from studying, I believe that they enable them to enrich their knowledge and progress in their

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. The main disadvantage of growing access to

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among teenagers is that

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some occasions they get

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from their

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is because of many entertaining applications and games that they can install on their

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, which make them

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spend a lot of time playing or watching videos.

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, a recent study carried out by the University of Ottawa in Canada

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showed that 40% of teenagers who have

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do not pay proper attention to their homework, which results in poor grades because of spending too much time on their

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, I believe that

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issue can be addressed by teaching

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how to

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their mobile

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in a proper way.

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are considered as a very useful thing that can lead to enrich

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knowledge and make them more successful in their

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is to say that by installing educational software,

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not only can gain additional information about topics that they study at school

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but solve any doubts that they may

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, the same study carried out by the University of Ottawa showed,

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, that those teenagers, who

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in a smart and controlled way, not only have had better results in their exams but their level of education was higher than expected. I think that wise and moderate

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could reduce its negative impacts. In conclusion,

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could affect

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studies

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due to the existence of so many entertaining applications,

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of them would

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their

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and their general information.