Writing task 1 (a letter) Your local council is closing the children’s playground in your locality as not many children visit the park. Write a letter to the council requesting not to close it. Include the following in your letter: – How important is the playground for children? – Why don’t children go to the playground? – What can be done to bring children back to the park?

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Hi Sir/Madam , I'm writing

this

letter after

knowing

Verb problem

learning

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about the closure of the children's playground ,

firstly

, I understand

this

decision is

due to

the building materials thrown between the playground and the newly constructed building but, that does not mean there are no alternative solutions for that matter, I hope will decision will be changed for opening it again. As it is the only place that people in the neighbourhood have for their kids to play and have some cheerful times , it does not make sense closing it now ,especially summer holidays going to end just

this

month so, taking

this

joy from them is really a disgrace. Children are in love with

this

service because of the wide range of activities that presents for them,

furthermore

, there are no near alternatives for them that they can count on. Eventually, I would suggest as a solution at least opening the park in the afternoons, at least there are no workers at that time so no worries about them or, equipment for the construction could be transferred to another place. With best regards, Yousif.

Submitted by yusif_salih on Thu May 25 2023

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logical structure

Ensure the letter has a clear structure with an appropriate introduction, body, and conclusion.

greeting and closing

Use proper salutations and sign-offs in formal letters. 'Hi' is informal and 'Sir/Madam' should be followed by a comma, not a space.

single idea per paragraph

Include a single main idea in each paragraph and use cohesive devices to link paragraphs smoothly.

complete response

Address all three bullet points from the task fully to achieve a higher task achievement score.

suitable writing tone

Maintain a consistent and suitable tone throughout the letter. Avoid informal language in a formal letter.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

186 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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