Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some people believe that
robots
will play an important role in future societies, Use synonyms
while
others argue that Linking Words
robots
might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion
On the one hand, some think that Use synonyms
robots
will replace humans to play an important role in future societies. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, others discuss that Linking Words
robots
might be harmful to society. In my perspective, both statements could be correct.
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To begin
with, these days Linking Words
robots
make life more comfortable and faster. Use synonyms
For instance
, they can work more cheaply and carefully without making mistakes and getting tired; Linking Words
that is
why Linking Words
robots
will probably play some important roles helped by AI. If Use synonyms
robots
are equipped with AI, they can improve the effectiveness of their decisions. Of course, Use synonyms
due to
the lack of emotions in Linking Words
robots
, they can’t replace humans in some ways that require deep decision-making.
Another point of view is that in the case of extensive use of Use synonyms
robots
, some bad effects can be expected. Use synonyms
For example
, people may less often utilize their brains to solve problems and it is very bad for improving your thinking skills. After using cell phones, we don’t memorize phone numbers. The application of Linking Words
robots
in industries can Use synonyms
also
cause a decline in the amount of physical Linking Words
labor
done. Change the spelling
labour
In addition
, the irregular use of Linking Words
robots
breeds laziness in people. I think work is necessary for everyone.
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To sum up
, Linking Words
this
comparison between two sentences is not completely correct, because both sentences might be right in some situations. Linking Words
Although
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robots
inevitably enter to make decisions in a crisis, whether or not they will have negative effects depends on our Use synonyms
behavior
. I think that if we use them normally, they can be very useful. We can Change the spelling
behaviour
also
make a better world with Linking Words
robots
, but if we abuse them, they can be harmful to human societies.Use synonyms
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