Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Thank them for the photos and for the holiday Explain why you don't write earlier Invite them to como and stay with you.

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Hey guys, I’m just writing to let you know that I’ve received the pictures from our holidays. Thanks a lot for sending me the photos. They reminded me of the great memories that we’d together in Malaysia. You have a great country and I enjoyed every single moment of the journey, especially the one time when we went to Langkawi Island. I’m out of words to say how I’m thrilled and thankful for everything. Sorry guys that I couldn’t write to you earlier. When I got back to work, after two weeks away, I had so many things left to do, and my boss forced me to do them as soon as possible. I,

also

, had to prepare myself for the final exam, which took me a lot of time. Anyways, now it’s your turn to come and visit my country. I bet you’ve never been to a Latin American country. If you come

5th of June, we’ll have a whale of a time because of the “June Carnival”. You know that Brazil has the best carnivals in the world. And, don’t worry about the place to stay because my apartment has enough rooms for all of us. All the best, Rasoul

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