Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say Agree to this arrangement. Say what time is suitable for you. *Describe what you are planning to do.

#friend #children #house #weekend #*agree #arrangement #*say #time #*describe

Dear Rina, I hope you are healthy and safe. It was really great to hear from you after

such

a long time. Today I am writing

this

letter to inform you that, I would love to have Gia and Tanay over for the weekend. To embark with, you know how much I love children. I am looking forward to having a splendid time with them. These days, I am on the morning shift,

thus

you can drop both of them anytime after 2:00 pm. I will be available and please tell me their favourite dishes as I can cook for them.

In addition

, I have planned a number of things. On Friday evening I will play a movie which is called Mouna.

Moreover

, on Saturday I will take them to the ice-cream parlour

then

the national zoo.

Furthermore

, I have much more planning for them, near my house a new Park had built I will take them there.

Last

but not the least, at night I will take them to a restaurant for the dinner. I think it will give them refreshment and fun. No more today, hope to see you soon. With love, Zannatul

Submitted by Zannatul Irin on Mon Jan 17 2022

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