Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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around the world which consist

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types of information and fields. Some of them are totally free while others are paid.

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essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion below as well. On the one hand, it is

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to

museums

to be paid in the entry, because of some financial and other fundamental reasons.

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, if it is earned money from visitors, the museum officials will exist their own budget excepting governments’ and

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let give them the incredible opportunity to look after the museum as much as possible. For

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, the bright example of

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will be, repairing old conditional exhibits or doing some construction works of the buildings.

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, earning somehow amount of money from comers, make them

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more attention to the museum than if it is compared to be free. So, making paid have enough useful sides to start earning from

museums

.

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, charging people for entry have some disadvantages as well. One of them is leading to the decrease amounts of visitors. So, not all sort

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could allow them to pay the charges.

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, they can be students or the poor’s that to pay

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kind of payments will be the huge extra expenditure for them.

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places

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can lead to

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decrease of the historic subject and knowledge. To conclude, as mentioned charging admissions have it is advantages and disadvantages, but if it comes to me, it should be totally free to enter

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all of

museums

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around the world. Because of giving

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to spread more historic knowledge.