In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this?how can people research this?

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houses there lives in.
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to find the past of the building.
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the assist to
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coutries
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countries
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history
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, which
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several reasons behind that
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. The first and foremost thing is to understand
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what culture they had,
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civilization they inculcated in the past. If the building belongs to
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100 or 150 years
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building
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some
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For a prime
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, Indian people
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do
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to follow. Another one is the archaeology department they do
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way, which is facil for them to do
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the
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contains so
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beneficial
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for them to live future. The prominent thing is advanced technology they found easily the
history
of the house. It enhances their living standards better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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