nowadays the crime rate is increasing especially among teenagers. what are the reasons behind it and how can we reverse this trend. What punishment methods should be used in your opinion.

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Newspapers,these days are splashed with issues related to the involvement of youngsters in criminal activities.There are myriad reasons behind
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like poverty,unemployment.In
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essay,I will cast light on the reasons as well as its possible solutions which
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must take to tackle
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serious issue.Apart from
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legal
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related to their non-usage of mobile phones and vehicles must be taken by the
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.I would like to explicate my views in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with,the
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and foremost reason that forces the
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to involved in criminal activities is an increase in the gap between rich and poor,that develop stress among the individuals which often misguides the youth,they wanted to attain the things which they cannot afford. For ,instance due to digitalisation,most
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wanted to adopt the things they see on social media platforms.
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,it often leads to their involvement in criminal activities.
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,
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nowadays focus on easy money earning methods and for
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the reason they involve themselves in some sort of
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without looking at the consequences.Due to these reasons,
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is increasing rapidly among youngsters.
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,the
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must take some strict
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against the culprits.So,that they may get a lesson for life as well as it doesn't destroy their careers.
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,the Administration must not provide mobile and vehicle access to the
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and it varies with the seriousness of the
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they committed.For ,example in ,Norway if a teenager commits a
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and in the eyes of law they find it a non-serious
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they may not be allowed to use their mobile phones and the public as well as private vehicles,for a few months and the time increases
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.Since youngsters are addicted to their mobiles,
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for transportation they require personal or public transport.Controlling their access in these two areas can create fear in their mind and
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time they will think 100 times before committing a
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. In conclusion,I personally believe that during the childhood period.The mind of a youngster is not properly developed
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the
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should take some
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but those
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must not destroy their future.The basic reason behind their involvement is the gap between the societies and poverty which can be solved by not allowing the kids to use public and private transport.
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,they must not be allowed to access their mobile phones till the time allotted by the high officials.
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