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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - Explain why you want to take time off work . - Give details of the amount of time you need . - Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.

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Dear sir, My name is Zannatul Firdaus, I am working at your office as an Accounts Officer. Today I am writing
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 letter to inform you that, I want some time off from my work, as I am going to be busy for the
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 few days. To embark with,
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 month I will go to Coxs Bazar, for vacation with my family members. On 1st February my son will turn 2.
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, it will be a very special
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 for me.
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, my husband wants to celebrate that
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 in a splendid way.
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, we want to make it a memorable
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 for life long.
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, I want at least five days off. On 30th January I will take for preparing and reaching there. On the
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day
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, we will organise our party,
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 on the
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day
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 we will celebrate
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 party and
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 the
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day
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 we will travel some places, on the fifth
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 we will be back in Dhaka.  I will join the office from 3rd February,
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, I will finish some of my work earlier and after coming back I will do some overtime work as I can accomplish my responsibilities. I hope that you will accept my request and give me the opportunity to spend some time with my family members. Yours faithfully, Zannatul Firdaus
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Respectful greeting (e.g., 'Dear [Manager's name],')
  • Time off, absence, leave of absence
  • Personal circumstances, compelling reason
  • Duration, number of days/weeks
  • Cover duties, delegate tasks, work handover
  • Alternative arrangements, contingency plans
  • Preparation, advance work, assistance
  • Gratitude, appreciate, understanding
  • Inconvenience, minimal disruption
  • Request approval, formally request
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