The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the modern world, technology has been improved dramatically in more developed countries. The governments of developed countries use
this
technology for tracking and monitoring citizens' activity on personal devices
such
as mobile phones or laptops almost without even realizing it. I think that citizens do not want to be monitored involuntarily.
To begin
with, there are so many individuals who live alone and have to take care of themselves in modern countries. If these people experienced unfortunate events
such
as disease and burglary, the government that monitorize individuals would be informed,
besides
sending help like ambulances and police.
In addition
, surveillance could help to prevent crime and reduce the crime rate in states that actively use technology
such
as security cameras, GPS.
Consequently
, cities would be safer than before and society would live peacefully.
On the other hand
, monitoring without realizing it could lead to a feeling of unfreedom.
In other words
, people could feel pressured and stressed because they think that they are being tracked by the government all the time. They try to be more careful when they act.
For example
,when a citizen organized a party with his friend, he would think that he would commit an
offense
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if he used illegal drugs.
Moreover
, monitoring humans could violate privacy. People could not carry out a daily routine like taking shower, changing dresses under the feeling of spying. In conclusion, tracking by the government could provide humans who live alone detect unfortunate events and
also
help prevent and reduce criminal events.
However
, it causes individuals to feel insecure about their private life. I believe that it is important that society has a right to live in privacy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • safe alternatives
  • global priority
  • limitations
  • drawbacks
  • potential benefits
  • government
  • international cooperation
  • investing
  • research and development
  • challenges
  • obstacles
  • transitioning
  • individuals
  • businesses
  • adopting
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