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Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thought and ideas. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Creativity
 comes with all new ideas and thoughts which can be generated independently and without any obligation to anyone and just by giving rise to the development process ,laking any kind of restrictions on how and in which way it should be put out .
Such
 a way will allow the fullest
creativity
 of the artists and the developers with the full-blown growth of the
arts
 and others skills.I partially agree with the above-mentioned idea as in the civilised
society
, we should respect everyone's feelings and we can not ignore other peoples likes and dislikes of the particular way of expressing
arts
 and
creativity
. Supporters of freedom of
creativity
 and development are in favour of the total freedom in expressing the thought process of the genuine people and are against any kind of limitation or restriction of the newer things to get maximum out of the mind of
such
 great thinkers and philosophers, but
this
 is not always the case as in some cases their own beliefs about the ideas got expressed as
creativity
 and
such
 expression creates issues in
society
. Groups are getting involved in support and opposition of the ideas and in some cases it gives rise to public violence on the streets with gruesome results . So for the best interest of the
society
 , there should be some kind of censorship on the new
arts
 and development which take place in the civilised
society
 and there should be standards of
arts
 and crafts to abide by the artists and work hard on new themes for the best of their own and for
society
.
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