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Some experts believe that it is better for a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some experts are of the opinion that foreign
language
 at primary
schools
 does better than at the secondary
schools
. Early introduction of new
language
 in primary
schools
 helps with expanding thinking horizons at an early stage of development, and I think the advantages of
this
 far more outweigh the disadvantages. In primary
schools
' brains of students are more flexible and have faster-grasping power and understanding for new things. Early introduction to a foreign
language
 will open their thought limits and scope of thinking beyond the boundaries of the nation. They get information about new
culture
 and civilisation in their primary years which provides better learning opportunities and exposure to foreign
culture
 and traditions.
For example
 with learning ,English they get used to the English trend of socialisation and work
culture
 and food and dressing sense.Parent and teachers respect and the way of expressing respect is different.
Such
 early exposure to
language
 and other etiquettes ,in some ,cases shows the negative impact on their own
culture
 and beliefs as well as familial structure
then
 they start ignoring their own customs and traditions in the favour of foreign
culture
. These brains are not mature enough to decide which is better for them and if it is forced by teaching institutes
then
 there will be a conflict of interests for parents and the organisations. In ,conclusion exposing to foreign languages and traditions in childhood is better for a child's overall development, if there will be a well-guided syllabus and support is available with proper training and explanation.
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