More and more people are seriously overweight. Some people suggest the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the widespread use of unhealthy foods has become common, and the number of
people
who suffer from obesity has increased. Use synonyms
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people
are argued that Use synonyms
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problem should be solved by raising the Linking Words
price
of fattening foods. I strongly disagree with Use synonyms
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idea for several reasons.
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First
of all, it is not justly to increase the Linking Words
price
of foodstuff in order to encounter obesity. Use synonyms
People
from all walks of life purchase fast Use synonyms
food
like hamburgers, pizza, and French fries. Use synonyms
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who live in deprived areas are unable to buy them forever, but Use synonyms
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who belong to the affluent of society can buy them without any problems. Use synonyms
This
solution is not good for vulnerable groups of society. Linking Words
For example
, children who live in low-income families are the Linking Words
first
victim of Linking Words
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issue.
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Secondly
, one of the most important recreational activities and gatherings is eating junk Linking Words
food
. And Use synonyms
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gathering assists Linking Words
people
to keep in touch and socialize. If the Use synonyms
price
of fast Use synonyms
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increases, numerous Use synonyms
people
, especially young Use synonyms
people
, are unable to go out and hang out with their peers. Use synonyms
This
limitation leads to depressions. Linking Words
For example
, students have low incomes, and they are not capable of paying for fast Linking Words
food
products at a high Use synonyms
price
.
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solution leads to discrimination among citizens of society, and some Linking Words
people
face a problem in their lives because they cannot afford to buy it forever, and I think training Use synonyms
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is the best way to tackle it.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite