Some say that the standard of behaviour among children has worsened and that this is their parents' fault; others say that schools are to blame. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many young
students
have poor behaviours, some people state that this
is schools’ fault, while this
essay will investigate both views but believe that parents
have the responsibility.
On the one hand, there are two reasons why schools are to blame. The main reason is that children
stay most of their time at school. Most students
spend half of the day at school, teachers
will have a higher chance to see their poor habits. For instance
, if teachers
see students
bully others but ignore it
, Correct pronoun usage
them
students
will not correct this
bad behaviour. Another reason is that teachers
often have a larger influence on children
. Most children
respect their teachers
so they are willing to listen to what teachers
say. Thus
, if a child gets into trouble, teachers
have the best possibilities to educate them.
On the other hand
, there are two reasons why it is parents’
fault. Correct article usage
the parents’
Firstly
, parents
have a closer relationship with their child
. When Fix the agreement mistake
children
parents
chat with them, they may realise some bad habits of them, for
example
if they find that their Add the comma(s)
,example
children
are bullying others, they can correct their bad habits. Moreover
, child's
personality comes from the practical examples Correct article usage
a child's
observe
from home. Kids' bad attitudes come from watching Wrong verb form
observed
parents
as they may copy from their parents
. They may decide whether some behaviours are right or wrong according to adult’s
attitudes. Fix the agreement mistake
adults’
As a result
, families stand a better responsibility in the failure of child’s
behaviour.
To conclude, Correct article usage
a child’s
although
schools have may have some responsibility on
young Change preposition
for
students
’ behaviors
, it is still mainly Change the spelling
behaviours
parents
’ fault because they have a deeper relationship and kids are perfect mirrors of their parents
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