Rich countries are getting richer while poor countries are getting poorer. What is the cause of this. What could be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays, wealthier
countries
become more rich, on the other hand
, yet developing countries
becoming financially unstable. The main reason for this
is the increase in skills employers moving abroad, However
, this
will be solved with the help of government
rules and regulations. In this
essay, both the causes and solutions will be discussed with relevant supporting ideas and examples.
To commence with, the prime cause for this
is educated and skilled people
migrate to other countries
for work. To elucidate, these days many university graduates prefer foreign countries
for their employment, therefore
this
will affect countries
skilled people
count. For instance
, recent research conducted by "The Times" shows that 75% of undergraduate students leave their home country for work and better life". This
shows that many countries
do not have enough skilled workers to perform locally.
On the other hand
, what could be done to solve this
problem is government
should increase salary and benefit to higher-skilled people
. This
means, most of
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the
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people
consider to migrate
because of money and Change the verb form
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better
lifestyle so if the Correct article usage
a better
government
ready
to provide all the facilities as requested by the skilled population which will be Add a missing verb
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allowance, salary increment, and better lifestyle Correct article usage
a Home
this
will help them to stay here. From my personal example, My friend has been working in Dubai for five years as a Senior Software Architect, and then
he received an offer from Sri Lanka with the house allowance for the same amount which he is getting in Dubai, then
he choose to work for Sri Lankan company meanwhile that company ranked number 1 in Sri Lanka. This
shows intelligent and skilled people
contribute a major role in developing a country.
In conclusion, this
essay discussed the problem that caused was many educated people
prefer to go abroad for their career, this
will lead to the impact countries
economy. However
, Countries
Government
should be considered and give them a better lifestyle and good pay.Fix the agreement mistake
Governments
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