Rich countries are getting richer while poor countries are getting poorer. What is the cause of this. What could be done to solve this problem?

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Nowadays, wealthier
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become more rich,
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, yet developing
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becoming financially unstable. The main reason for
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is the increase in skills employers moving abroad,
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,
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will be solved with the help of
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rules and regulations. In
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essay, both the causes and solutions will be discussed with relevant supporting ideas and examples. To commence with, the prime cause for
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is educated and skilled
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migrate to other
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for work. To elucidate, these days many university graduates prefer foreign
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for their employment,
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will affect
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skilled
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count.
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, recent research conducted by "The Times" shows that 75% of undergraduate students leave their home country for work and better life".
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shows that many
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do not have enough skilled workers to perform locally.
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, what could be done to solve
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problem is
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should increase salary and benefit to higher-skilled
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.
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means, most
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people
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consider
to migrate
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because of money and
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lifestyle so if the
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ready
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to provide all the facilities as requested by the skilled population which will be
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allowance, salary increment, and better lifestyle
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will help them to stay here. From my personal example, My friend has been working in Dubai for five years as a Senior Software Architect, and
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he received an offer from Sri Lanka with the house allowance for the same amount which he is getting in Dubai,
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he choose to work for Sri Lankan company meanwhile that company ranked number 1 in Sri Lanka.
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shows intelligent and skilled
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contribute a major role in developing a country. In conclusion,
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essay discussed the problem that caused was many educated
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prefer to go abroad for their career,
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will lead to the impact
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economy.
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,
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Government
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should be considered and give them a better lifestyle and good pay.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial assistance
  • technological assistance
  • economic gap
  • basic needs
  • healthcare
  • education
  • infrastructure
  • global stability
  • diplomatic relations
  • global cooperation
  • dependency
  • self-sufficiency
  • strings attached
  • political decisions
  • economic decisions
  • sovereignty
  • tension
  • mismanagement
  • corruption
  • intended purpose
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