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More and more people are seriously overweight. Some people suggest the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #price #foods
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 modern era and the gut's responsive bleat,
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 today have been completely dependent on fast
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.
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,
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 transient decoy comes with its ramifications. I would differ from the viewpoint presented by the masses. I shall profound by views on
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 issue. The primary causative effect of fast
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 is obesity which leads to numerous health issues like heart attack, stroke and polycystic ovarian diseases which is common in
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 era of females. Consumption of fast
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 or ready-made
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 is more common in
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 whose working schedule is stretched and they do not get time to cook their meals. So they completely depend upon fast
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. Increasing the prices of fattening foods by applying more taxes on them will not stop
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 to consume these types of
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. Most of the time surveys have found that the upper and average middle class are consuming more and they hardly get affected if the government increases the price. Applying taxes on fast
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 on fast
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 is not a solution.
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, we can educate the masses about the consequences of fast
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 consumption. Government should start a health campaign, In which they should teach the masses about a healthy lifestyle, good diet intake , exercise etc.It is mostly seen in the young generation as they love to consume fast
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 and they love to give minor treats.Government should make a healthy campaign too on a healthy lifestyle at college, so the young generation will come to know about the health hazards of consuming fast
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 frequently.
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, to conclude, we may say that increasing the prices and making junk foods expensive couldn’t go in alignment with the idea of keeping
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 fit and healthy. so
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 should focus on exercise and a healthy diet to keep them fit .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • fattening foods
  • calorie-dense
  • healthier food choices
  • taxation
  • economic implications
  • social implications
  • subsidies
  • nutritional education
  • public health campaigns
  • nanny state
  • individual's right
  • consumer behavior
  • preventative measures
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