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Childhood obesity is becoming a problem thoughout the developed world . Because of this , some people think that adverts for fast food , sweets and sugary snacks should not be allowed in schools and colleges . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this ?

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advertisement: notice or announcement for promoting a product in public . Eating junk food cause many diseases like obesity in children which is very common nowadays . Due to
this
 , some argue that ads for an unhealthy
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 should be banned near school premice so that the obesity rate can decrease . I totally disagree with their statement . The
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 and foremost factor is that there are other sources available to advertise the products .
For example
 , TV and social media . For influencing the generation , there are a lot of ads appearing in between while using the internet and TV for entertainment , education , sport and news purposes . Apart from
this
 , these products are available at every corner . So , fast meals could be easily noticed by youngsters in their surroundings .
However
 , kids may be less influenced by banning the ads in study areas , parents
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 play a vital role in the meal of children . If parents do not give money to their offspring for purchasing anything whatever they want to , they may not get attracted towards unhealthy food . Another factor is that there are other reasons which lead to fatness . In
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 obesity, lack of exercise and gummed in front of TV or laptops are playing an important role . In conclusion , to motivate adults towards other products , the ban of posters of unhealthy food in school areas could be done . The banning ad in the education area might only create a little difference in condition . Because other factors really play a good role in fatness , which should be changed to improve the condition in a noticeable way .
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