Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many places in the world, people are facing significant issues which are relating to the environment, population and education. As for my country, Vietnam, the government will face
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a big problem is air pollution in the
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occur in the future. There are many reasons why air pollution will become a significant issue in Vietnam in the
next
decade.
First
of all, the transportation system is too bad
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transport goods and in personal movement. In Ho Chi Minh city, traffic jams occur on a regular basis, especially from 6 am to 8 am and from 4 pm to 6 pm,
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As a result
, not only the atmosphere will be polluted seriously but
also
the health of people will be affected badly.
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, children who are the
next
generation will become less intelligent than the current one. In fact, the research shows that air pollution affects directly to
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health of students, which makes them cannot concentrate on studying for a long time. The government has to take responsibility for
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matter. It is necessary to allocate the budget for transportation more than other ones. In conclusion,
this
issue will become more and more serious if the government and the citizens do not solve it together immediately.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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