In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think this books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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The inclination toward fictional novels and dramas based on

crime

incidents has become much more popular in the

last

decade. A group of

people

is watching

such

shows to make themselves aware of

such

heinous incidents so that

such

problems do not arise to them. In my opinion, though these types of

programs

will make

people

aware, that can hurt youth. To embark on, as per the present condition,

people

are supposed to take care of themselves due to the increasing

crime

rate.

People

can know in detail about the procedure and loopholes by reading books or watching

such

television

programs

This

helps them to make learning about the consequences of doing criminal activities.

Moreover

this

vivid audiovisual presentation and detailed narrated description help

people

get rid of

such

incidents with them. When

people

read fictional novels, they become well aware of the criminal mind and their activities which in the long run helps them to survive in society. In

this

case, it is worth mentioning that a TV program, namely "

Crime

files," has helped reduce the banking OTP(one-time-password) fraud as

people

became aware of that.

Thus

, it is evident that these helped

people

save their money from

such

fraud;

therefore

people

watch

such

programs

On the other hand

such

crime

scenes may hurt the mind of adolescents.

This

violent video or descriptive narration may harm their growing minds and can lead to trauma even.

In addition

this

, they may become involved in juvenile activities when they face a shortage of pocket money. To mitigate the crunch of cash, they may plan for robbery in the same way as shown on TV. Illustration can be given; just a few months ago, a bank robbery took place in Allahabad in the same way as shown in "Sabdhan India." The dark side of

this

is not the less. To conclude, telecasted

programs

and written storybooks on

crime

make

people

well aware in advance of

such

mishappening;

however

, the young mind may become muddy and prone to a felony by applying those formulas of

crime

Therefore

, in my opinion,

this

type of telecasting should be restricted to awareness only; detailed procedures must not be revealed.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think this books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Some people think that businesses should provide sports facilities foremployees. Others consider that a person’s health is their own responsibility, not a company’s problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think it does not matter if a professional sportsman or sportswoman misbehaves on or off the field if they play well. What is your opinion about this?

Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion？

Levels of consumer debt are increasing across the world. To address this, a new subject should be introduced in secondary schools: how to manage personal finances. To what extent do you agree with this statement?