You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to request you to change my room as I am finding some challenges to continue staying with my roommate. My roommate, with whom I have been staying for more than 2 years has fallen into bad company. We are having frequent fights and arguing often because of his new friends. The issue is they keep partying and play loud music every night. Even after requesting them several times, they do not budge and
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, I can hardly get enough sleep. Due to lack of sleep, I am unable to concentrate during classes, which has affected my exam results.
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, I would like to change my room to a single accommodation in the
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semester.
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, I would prefer an attached bathroom and a WiFi connection. I hope you consider my request and grant me permission to move into a new room. Yours sincerely, Sneha Kapoor
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