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In some cultures the parents arrange marriages for their children but in others people choose their own marriage partner. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each system?

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Many
people
 believe many times because of their religion
that is
 right to oblige their kids to marry
someone
, whereas in other nations where
people
 are opposed to it. It is true that there are civilisations where
people
 do not allow their children to choose their partner, but parents do that. The main disadvantage is that young adults end up unhappy
,
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 because they have to live with
someone
 who
do
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 not really love.
Also
, there are
families
 who marry their child at a young age either with
someone
 at the same age or maybe older,
clearly
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 because they cannot fend for themselves, making a deal with other
families
 for financial support. In the only case where
this
 situation could be conducive to the youngsters, is that their
families
knows
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 what is the best for them and they want to see them happy.
On the other hand
 in developed countries where democracy prevails, citizens are free to make their own choices and decide how they want to make their
family
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.
This
 is beneficial for them because they have the opportunity to find
someone
 who really
love
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and
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 end up happy. But there are
also
 many cases where
someone
 makes a wrong choice concerning his partner.
For example
, there are many
families
 in which domestic violence prevails.
In addition
, another disadvantage for
people
 who have the right
who
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 they will marry. is that they maybe never make a decision and dedicate on their careers, as a
,
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result they never make a family. To sum up. I am a
belief
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of
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that
someone
 must be free to find the person who
want
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 to spend the rest of his life.
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