The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, Increasing social
media
is developing day by day.
As a result
,
People
easily contact anyone in society and need help with social
media
instead
of direct meetings. If there have
also
disadvantages is that social
media
people
sometimes be bad. without knowing them only the via of social
media
can help to befriend. Now I intend to analyse the topic.
To begin
with, using social
media
is helpful for the whole world. For those
people
easily contact the public in anywhere and any places without seeing them. The
first
and foremost advantage is that most of the
people
are now stay busy with their work so that they cannot connect the community
people
. As
result
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,result
show examples
social
media
is a great way. For ,instance if one person is a doctor but needs to help a lawyer for any reason. Though he is not interacting with the community
people
he is so much interacting with social
media
and knows the good lawyer.
Then
easily doctor contacts him via social
media
and share with him the problem. Moving to the
next
, helping the social
media
most
instead
of direct meeting. Even
people
who wanted to go to any other places or
country
but they did not know that community,
Then
social
media
easily helps them to contact with that countries
people
.
For example
, the
student
wants to go higher studies and get opportunities but he does not know the environment of
this
country
.
Then
social
media
helps him to communicate with
people
abroad. Though the benefit is there drawbacks
also
happen.
Such
as the
student
does not know
people
's behaviour and how they are friendly in
this
country
. At,
first
he needs to talk to them face to face and stay with them for some days or months directly.
Then
the
student
understands the
people
,
Otherwise
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,Otherwise
show examples
it's difficult for the
student
to know the behaviour of
this
country
people
by social
media
. To conclude, Social
media
has advantages and disadvantages both. But the busy world is now tough to communicate directly whether social
media
gives
this
opportunity. Here show the advantages is outweigh than disadvantages.
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