Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days many

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dangerous environmental issues took place, where

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individuals or

countries

can not dominate on it. so there is no doubt that

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considered

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international. In

this

essay, I am going to discuss

this

statement and draw my own conclusion.

First

of all,

a

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joint efforts should be made by all

countries

. The main reason given to support

this

claim is that

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a lot of phenomenons

such

as pollution or global warming can not be managed by the

countries

or individual continents. presentations, conferences and awareness programs should be presented all over the world to help

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people

follow

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environment

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friendly approach.

Moreover

, the government must be support organizations, companies, industries and agriculture, and prevent their harmful actions just as, emissions of toxic gases or pouring water and oil into seas and rivers.

Moreover

, while

countries

try to solve

this

dilemma,

people

have to respond and deal with the planet as their homes.

Firstly

, garbage should be thrown in its designated place.

Thus

, its unpleasant smell will not pollute the air.

In addition

, it

assumed

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that

people

contribute to

maintain

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of

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energy by

reduce

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using air conditioners when the weather outdoor is great, and turn off unnecessary lights, and

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off TVs and computers if no one is using them.

Besides

that,

people

should

be depend

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on public transportation to reduce the

amount

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of gases

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by cars that pollution is involved. In conclusion, these issues will partially disappear in the advanced years if the

people

and

countries

become more aware, and they work together to find and follow

a suitable methods

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throughout their life in order to save the environment.