Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extend do you agree?

It is often said that enterprises must build athletic and social buildings like coffee shops,

gyms

and restaurants for local people. I personally agree with

this

statement on a variety of grounds.

To begin

with, these kinds of facilities are mutually beneficial both for the

companies

and people.

First

and foremost, many citizens spend plenty of their leisure time there, as a

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they end up spending a lot of money as well. So, corporations can take advantage

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trend in order to increase their incomes. A clear illustration of

this

could be said to be that in Athens, Aegean Airlines has built many coffee shops around the city and

this

investment provides huge incomes for the company (around 2

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euros per month). Apart from that, with

this

investment

companies

can be advertised as well.

For instance

, the same company I mentioned before, gives coupons to its customers with

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% discount if they travel with its airlines.

In addition

,

this

tendency which more and more

companies

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nowadays, has provided many jobs and varieties of entertainment to citizens. A clear example of

this

is, in my hometown Serres, a few years ago there were not enough

gyms

to go to.

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, the subscription for these

gyms

was affordable. A couple of years ago, Deloitte has constructed two huge

gyms

and one football field in my hometown.

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ameliorate

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unemployment and

also

had

benefit

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the local economy. To sum up, I am of the belief that these statements support the view that

companies

should invest

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athletic and social facilities for local commodities because both sides will benefit in long term.