Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
With the advent of modern technology, we are experiencing
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revolution has brought many benefits but there are some drawbacks too.
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, these devices save a lot of time as doing some of these works manually are extremely time consuming
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Secondly
, working without electronics can be tiresome for a lot of people. Several elderly folks staying on their own can find it immensely difficult to finish these tasks and equiments
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instruments
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Moreover
, not everyone can afford all these appliances as these are hugely expensive for a number of individuals.
In the conclusion, the devices can make life certainly easy, we can save our valuable minutes and focus on more important work that can help us grow. However
, it's also
crucial to be fit and active and not to be so reliant on the machines.Submitted by shatakshi117 on
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