Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter about the computer course which interests me as I am having a keen interest in

such

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sort of courses related to computers,

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, at the time of university, there was no specific subject I had.

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, as per the requirements I have completed an elementary course.

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, I want to share that I am staying alone from the family and dealing with all the financial expenses alone so I have been working an accounting firm which helps me to deal with my monthly expenses like rent, food, and so on. So,

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work is quite essential for me to deal with all the things.

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, my work timings are 9 am to 6 pm, if possible can I take the training of the course in

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particular timings. In fact, it would be great if I can take the classes between 6:30 pm to 9 pm because that will not hamper my job hours, and in that way, I will be a part of

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. I hope to hear a positive response from your end. Yours Sincerely, Swati Arora

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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