19.In some countries, people buy clothes and choose hair styles according to the latest fashion. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?
people
nowadays are trying their best to be fashionable, modern, and one of the ways is to change the way of dress and hairstyle according to the trend. there are many reasons that contribute to the situation, from personal to social factors. My intention is to clarify those aforementioned elements and give an in-depth analysis on whether Use synonyms
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situation is good or bad and why.
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are increasingly racing to follow the trend is in no small part due to the influence of Use synonyms
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. Everyone needs to work in a team, the need to be respected, included and communicated is necessary. Use synonyms
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, a new employee needs to have a neat outfit, a trendy hairstyle to make a good impression on the interviewer. Linking Words
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, the trend can benefit Linking Words
people
in the way of prompting them to finely tune their wearings to have better chances inside their workplaces. But, personally, the situation itself is getting worse due to the misuse and the making up deviations of the original positive meaning. Use synonyms
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people
are trying to buff their wealth by wearing fancy suits and exotic hairstyles, and with the power of the press, they started to believe those are the norms and a must to follow. Use synonyms
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, it gradually becomes a source of financial pressure and rich-poor discrimination in society.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite