In some countries, some criminal trials are shown on TV so people can watch the trials live. Do you think the advantages of this practice outweigh the disadvantages?

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It cannot be denied that television and communication services have made the world more transparent and open. Having said that, broadcasting criminal
trials
for viewers had become a common
occurance
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occurrence
amongst many nations, which may have a positive or negative
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connotation
. In
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why the drawbacks of the action mentioned above
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the benefits.
To begin
with the positives, in many countries watching live
court
trials
could have an educational aspect.
This
is because the steps and stages of
particular
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trial often skip the common eye and
people
often believe that the
court
proceedings are similar to ones
showed
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in movies.
For example
, an average household due to lack of education and exposure to
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Judiciary
system is likely to absorb readily accessible and dramatic information presented in the drama's and silver screens, which is often not true.
Therefore
, live
court
trials
could support
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enriching
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the publics
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average scale of knowledge around the originalities of
justice
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system. Turning to
disdvanatages
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disadvantages
,
Although
public access to the criminal
court
proceedings through live tv would be educational from one aspect,
this
may prove disastrous for the
people
imvolved
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involved
in the trial. As a consequence of the above, if
people
that are being trialled are
identfied
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identified
by
public
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,
this
might
seriosuly
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seriously
damage their dignity and future work opportunities, irrespective of the
court
's verdict.
For example
, a man who is charged
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asssault
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assault
and abuse will find it almost impossible to get a job, where vulnerable children participate.
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is only on the premise that he was charged for
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crime, so there will always be a possibility of offence. Another one might be finding gaps in the justice systems to get away, thorough studying and repeated examination of the
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through exposure to watching
court
trials
may allow potential offenders
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flaws, which would allow them to get away from a crime that they might prepare themselves to commit. In conclusion, in my opinion, benefits like public education
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outweighed by
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the loss
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of dignity in the community
,
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and exposing justice's
systmes
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systems
system
systemic
flaws that
people
could avail to evade deserving punishments.
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