In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of taking a gap year before starting university
The supplied line graphs highlight the information with regard to the number of people in units of thousands, who move into and out of the United Kingdom throughout the
period
from 1993 to 2002.
At the beginning of the research, figures on emigrants and immigrants are composed of 275 thousand
and 250 thousand
respectively. According to the graph, we can observe that the number of emigrants rose inconsiderable to 300 thousand
by the year 1994 and remained to be stable during the research period
from 1994 to 1997. However
, a more detailed look at the chart affords to infer that after 1997 the total inflow migration
has spiked to 500 thousand
by the beginning of the 2000s. Onwards, the figures on such
a type of migration
do not incur overwhelming changes.
At the same survey period
, findings on outflow migration
afford to conclude that the number of immigrants does not undergo a tendency. Moreover
, figures have been fluctuating throughout the period
. To summarise on the second
line graph, we can point out the increase of outflow migration
for 9 years. To be more precise, growth was more than 75 thousand
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite