Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

In our world, researching things is a common practice that researchers or scientists can do to benefit
this
world.
However
, there are some who believe that those results should be ultimately shared in every field including scientific, business and academic while others, including me, consider that valuable
information
somehow should keep confidential. On the one hand, sharing all the data can benefit people in terms of providing more general knowledge to perceive, interpret and adapt.
In other words
, those who got useful
information
can analyze details, justify problems and develop certain things to solve or prevent future disasters.
For instance
, the important details about COVID-19 have been shared with the public,
therefore
, scientists, businesses or even institutions can use those data to invent the magical vaccine to cure all the potential diseases that will happen in the future.
On the other hand
,
such
crucial
information
can lead to safety issues of all departments
such
as corporate crime, personal health, entertainment. Being revealed all the
information
, people can misinterpret and eventually misunderstand that can harm themselves or society. As a medical example, Paracetamol can prevent symptoms of COVID-19, which doctors have been secretly diagnosed because not all the cases will obtain a good result.
However
, many people know and they have been taken many doses of the medicine.
As a result
, they have been suffered from an overdose.
Therefore
, some
information
is not always good to be published. In conclusion, I think certain
information
that has been told to the users would give advantages but, that not be said to be all opened as drawbacks may prevail over the merit.
This
means the safety and violence should be considered before being informed whether some aspects
is
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good to be all shared or present only what is needed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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