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Also it is widdely recognized that cars damage the environment, their manufacture and use to increase. why is this the case? how could this increase be controlled?

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Although
 the
harmness
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hardness
harness
 of
cars
 is obvious vividly, they are produced increasingly and
people
 use them often.
This
 essay will discuss
about
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the probable reasons
of
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this
 case and the solutions that we can implement for
controling
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controlling
 it.
To begin
 with,
Automobile
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the Automobile
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 and
Petroluem
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Petroleum
industries
 are
importatnt
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important
 for many countries.
This
 is simply because, they have so many employees that they work for them and by shutting these
industries
 down,thousands of
people
 will
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loose
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lose
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 their jobs.
Besides
, these kinds of
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the industry
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industry
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industries
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 provide huge
indomes
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incomes
income
 .
Therefore
, they help to
economy
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the economy
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 of their country.
Moreover
,
people
 prefer to
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 their own car because they believe their
cars
 are more
caomfortable
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comfortable
 and efficient rather than other
froms
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forms
 of transportation.
This
 is simply because
,
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the
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cars
 are
such
 private vehicles and
people
 can use them any
houre
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hour
hours
 of a day.
In
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 the opposite, public transportation
are
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is
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 full of
people
 most of the time and they have
schedueled
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scheduled
 time working which would be inappropriate for the majority of
people
. There are some strategies that could be implemented to try
control
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this
 issue.
Firstly
,
government
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the government
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 should improve the system of public transportation by increasing the number of vehicles and expanding their time working.
Secondly
, automobile companies should produce
the
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cars
 which
they
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consume
less
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fewer
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fuels
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fuel
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.
Thirdly
,
government
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the government
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by
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with
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 the help of social media
,
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 should encourage
people
 to use less of their
cars
 and mention the
enviromental
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environmental
 problems that would be happened because of
this
 global carelessness. To conclude,
Automobile
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the Automobile
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 and
Pteroluem
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Petroleum
industries
 cannot
shutt
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shut
 down and we must implement some strategies to help both
people
 and
industries
 become more eco-friendly.
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