A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Hello Anna, I am writing to thank you that you accepted to take care of my house and to look after my dog during my trip to Japan. It has been

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a long time since I have been able to take a long vacation, so thank you again for making

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happen. Let me give you some details so that we will be on the same page. Today, I confirmed my booking and I paid the trip's expenses. I will travel

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Friday at 10:00 P.M. from Atlanta's airport, and I will stay in Japan for five weeks. Once I arrive there, I will send you my new international number just in case

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you want any help. Regarding my dog, you must give him the medicine every day at 2:00 P.M.

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, he has to eat at least three times a day. If you don't mind, you can walk him just 10 minutes per day. By the way, don't forget to cut the lawn every Saturday, though. I know that all

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will be a new experience for you, but hopefully it will be easy. I can't wait to hear back from you. Best wishes, Jay

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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