It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports and music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Talents
are largely considered as given things. In regard to talents
, some people
argue that people
are born with certain talents
while other people
argue that any child can be taught any abilities. I will examine both views in this
essay.
First
of all, I'd like to examine the opinion that attaches more importance on
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to
education
than on given things. They say people
would not know if they have some specific talents
or not,
if they were not taught. Remove the comma
apply
In other words
, education
can bring out students' potentials inside and improve their abilities. Besides
, anyone could be a musician or an artist if he or she learned how to compose or to
draw. Fix the infinitive
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For example
, there are various kinds of Add an article
the genre
genre
only in the art field, including modern art which expresses something by lines. In Fix the agreement mistake
genres
this
kind of genre, people
easily find out who is better. Therefore
, education
is important because it makes people
find out their talents
and there are numerous fields people
can challenge themselves without some specific talents
.
On the other hand
, there are other people
who think talents
are essential. They say that talents
are decided by genes, so which people
have which talents
might be decided when they were babies. Also
, they argue that doing better than others are strongly influenced by talents
, even though education
could improve people
' talents
. Especially, when it comes to the field which is related to prizes, such
as athelets
, it is good to Correct your spelling
athletes
people
who have good talents
take the jobs. For instance
, it is hardly possible for a student who was taught to swim as a course of school to win the person who have
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has
his
good abilities and learned swimming since long ago. Correct pronoun usage
apply
That is
why people
think talents
are given things and they are essential to be a good Correct your spelling
sportsman
sports man
.
To sum up, there are both opinions about which is more important between Correct your spelling
sportsman
education
andtalents
. Correct your spelling
and talents
Nevertheless
, both talents
and education
are important. It seems to me that talents
are more vital factors than education
because talents
can make good results in general.Submitted by gaingloryb on
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