It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports and music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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are largely considered as given things. In regard to
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, some
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argue that
people
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are born with certain
talents
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while other
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argue that any child can be taught any abilities. I will examine both views in
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of all, I'd like to examine the opinion that attaches more importance
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than on given things. They say
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would not know if they have some specific
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or not
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if they were not taught.
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,
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can bring out students' potentials inside and improve their abilities.
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, anyone could be a musician or an artist if he or she learned how to compose or
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draw.
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, there are various kinds of
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only in the art field, including modern art which expresses something by lines. In
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kind of genre,
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easily find out who is better.
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,
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is important because it makes
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find out their
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and there are numerous fields
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can challenge themselves without some specific
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.
On the other hand
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, there are other
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who think
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are essential. They say that
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are decided by genes, so which
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have which
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might be decided when they were babies.
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, they argue that doing better than others are strongly influenced by
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, even though
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could improve
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'
talents
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. Especially, when it comes to the field which is related to prizes,
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as
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athletes
, it is good to
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who have good
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take the jobs.
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, it is hardly possible for a student who was taught to swim as a course of school to win the person who
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good abilities and learned swimming since long ago.
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why
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think
talents
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are given things and they are essential to be a good
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sportsman
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sports man
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sportsman
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. To sum up, there are both opinions about which is more important between
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andtalents
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and talents
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, both
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and
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are important. It seems to me that
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are more vital factors than
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because
talents
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can make good results in general.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • innate abilities
  • genetic make-up
  • inherent aptitude
  • nurturing environment
  • rigorous training
  • proficient
  • initial advantage
  • consistent practice
  • perseverance
  • quality training
  • prodigies
  • dedication
  • long-term success
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