Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Nowadays, many
people
like to listen to music
, some people
think that music
is a good way
to communicate with different cultures
or ages
. This
essay totally agrees with this
statement and will explain why.
First
of all, music
is a method to communicate with people
. It is notable that music
is a good way
to spread their thought, emotion, or culture
to other people
. Some lyrics write about love while others write about their life. There are different kinds of songs
, and all songs
have a main point. Therefore
, in recent years, people
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songs
because it is the faster way
to understand their culture
and can learn the
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For example
, when I was a student, my English teacher used to let us listen to English songs
or let us remember the lyrics. This
can let us learn English fanner and can understand the difference between our culture
.
Moreover
, music
can even brank the wall of different cultures
and ages
. For example
, people
who like anime songs
can be all around the world, they can also
be a young generation or middle-aged people
. These people
can communicate with each other because they all like anime songs
. They can share the anime songs
they like with each other and can chat about these songs
. People
can have a chance to meet different generations or different countries’ friends through music
.
In conclusion, I definitely agree that music
is a good way
of bringing people
of different cultures
and ages
together. Music
is a method to spread their emotion, or culture
to other people
while can also
brank the wall of different cultures
and ages
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