Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Nowadays, many
people
like to listen to
music
, some
people
think that
music
is a good
way
to communicate with different
cultures
or
ages
.
This
essay totally agrees with
this
statement and will explain why.
First
of all,
music
is a method to communicate with
people
. It is notable that
music
is a good
way
to spread their thought, emotion, or
culture
to other
people
. Some lyrics write about love while others write about their life. There are different kinds of
songs
, and all
songs
have a main point.
Therefore
, in recent years,
people
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to
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different foreign
songs
because it is the faster
way
to understand their
culture
and can learn
the
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their language too.
For example
, when I was a student, my English teacher used to let us listen to English
songs
or let us remember the lyrics.
This
can let us learn English fanner and can understand the difference between our
culture
.
Moreover
,
music
can even brank the wall of different
cultures
and
ages
.
For example
,
people
who like anime
songs
can be all around the world, they can
also
be a young generation or middle-aged
people
. These
people
can communicate with each other because they all like anime
songs
. They can share the anime
songs
they like with each other and can chat about these
songs
.
People
can have a chance to meet different generations or different countries’ friends through
music
. In conclusion, I definitely agree that
music
is a good
way
of bringing
people
of different
cultures
and
ages
together.
Music
is a method to spread their emotion, or
culture
to other
people
while can
also
brank the wall of different
cultures
and
ages
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural diversity
  • harmony
  • integration
  • bridging gaps
  • foster
  • ignite
  • embrace
  • communicate
  • celebrate
  • appreciate
  • inclusivity
  • universal language
  • emotional resonance
  • shared experiences
  • intercultural dialogue
  • intergenerational connections
  • cultural exchange
  • catalyst
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