Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

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rate is increasing in many countries, and youngsters are more involved

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can significantly lessen

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social security; the origins of

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situation and a number of solutions will be discussed here. Perhaps, the main factor can be the violence which is likely mental and psychological in origin and of

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it seems to stem from different reasons,

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; nowadays, addiction is more widespread especially among young people. Youngsters’ drug engagement causes them to miss their jobs and money.

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, in some cases using drugs make them feel illusion and they might commit the

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situation .Another cause is unemployment and increasing cost of living which in some cases

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to commit the

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). The

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factor is family problems like divorce, lack of family cohesion and emotional deprivation, meaning that all these mentioned factors may increase anxiety, stress and violence among people. Turning to possible solutions, the

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remedy would be by police services to more fight with drug dealers’ .If getting access to

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kind of drugs

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more;

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would affect to decrease the amount of

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in society. The

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solution might be for the governments to allocate a budget especially for young people in lowering income families to educate them .If they were trained properly, they could find an appropriate job so they might not

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any law-breaking.

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and the most main remedy would be for

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to importance to up bring their children with ethics fundamental.

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they should strive to improve the family relationship among family members in order to make a safe atmosphere

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for children. In summary, the major factors appear to be family problems, addiction and high living

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. A coordinated response by the family, the police services and

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the government would probably well lessen the

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rate.