The parents of your Australian friend chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for her Write a letter to the parents, Say why you think chris will enjoy the surprise party Explain why your wont be able to attent the party Give details of a plan to see chris at a different time

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Dear Mr and Ms, I hope you are all doing well, It is so nice to hear from you. Particularly, planning for Chris's birthday with 20 of her friends is a wonderful idea since she is so sensitive and keen on her birthdays. As far as I remember, once she told me how dreamy it could be to throw her eighteenth birthday party in her favourite modern-decorated beach bar which is just the place you have reserved by chance.

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concept will blow her mind to be with all her friends together right there. Sadly, I will not be able to accept your invitation

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a business trip that I will be taking out of town on that exact date. Unfortunately,

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is a pre-planned organisation from the company that I work and I do not have any chance to postpone it.

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, I am in touch with Chris and we often meet up in Brown cafe,

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I will contact her and apologise for my absence just after my trip. With respects, Narges

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Spelling and Grammar

Double-check spelling and grammar to ensure a flawless letter, although minor errors don't significantly detract from understanding.

Task Achievement

Include a brief closing line to reinforce appreciation for the invitation and express hope the event is wonderful even in your absence.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter demonstrates clear structure with separate paragraphs effectively conveying distinct ideas.

Task Achievement

The tone is polite and respectful, suitable for addressing a friend's parents.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

176 words

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The parents of your Australian friend chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for her Write a letter to the parents, Say why you think chris will enjoy the surprise party Explain why your wont be able to attent the party Give details of a plan to see chris at a different time

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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