You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: say where you are going, describe your home explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,

#travel #summer #friend #house #home #addresses #___

Dear Donna, I hope you doing great. By the way, did you remember the fantastic news I told you the other week when we were having wine and steak at your place? Actually, because of my amazing performance

this

past few months at work, my boss rewarded me with a trip to Korea

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summer. And ,

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I'm not gonna pass

this

opportunity to take some time off from work. I was hoping you could look for my house for the time being. Well, it's not really quite that hard to look after my house. It's just an 85 sqm home with a small backyard. You could

also

enjoy my tiny swimming pool with Jude while I am away. I just need you to water my plants and feed my dog, of ,course you know my dog "Kimchi".

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, please do some light cleaning if you have some spare time. I would really appreciate it. Just kidding. You have nothing to worry

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cleaning my house, I will just call the cleaning agency about that. I'll be gone for just 7-9 days. Thank you so much. Just let me know if you make it happen. Please? Kind regards, Monica your pretty best friend.

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7 paragraphs

203 words

8.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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