Nowadays, parents are allowing their children to use tablets and smart phones to enhance learning. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Today,

children

are being permitted to use electronic devices for the sake of

education

. It has resulted

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increased vision problems and reduced physical activity in

children

.

Although

this

trend is beneficial for better learning; in my opinion, it has

worst

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repercussions on the

health

and wellbeing of

children

.

Therefore

, its detrimental effects are more significant than its benefits. Parents let their

children

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have technological gadgets for educational purposes. They can learn either by e-reading or through educational games. Reading opens doors for all types of

education

and develops a habit of learning.

Likewise

, academic games,

such

as word search, not only boost creativity but

also

improve knowledge. Parents want their

children

capable to face

challenges

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of life; so, they allow them to learn through

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smart phones

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and tablets.

On the other hand

, excessive use of electronic tools causes

health

problems in

children

. In the present generation, at least one child is seen with the issue of weakness of

eye sight

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.

However

, in the past, the incidence of

long sightedness

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was quite rare in

children

.

Moreover

,

children

prefer to spend most of their time in front of screens,

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leaves very little time for them to play outside. Research has proven,

children

, these days, are ten times less active physically than their counterparts

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decades ago.

Therefore

, childhood obesity is an emerging problem in modern societies which often leads to serious illnesses -

for instance

, hypertension and diabetes - in

children

.

Hence

, the use of technological devices has adverse effects on the

health

of

children

. In conclusion, electronic gadgets are a great source of

education

for

children

;

however

, they provide

education

at the expense of

health

.

Therefore

, their disadvantages outweigh

advantages

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.