In many countries plastic bags are main source of rubbish causing pollution in oceans and on land therefore they should be banned . To what extent do you agree or disagree

It’s been requested by most of the people in many countries to ban all
plastic
products especially , bags due to the toxicity which affects the environment and biodiversity of the oceans and lands. I completely agree with the statement, I hereby give my valuable supporting point in the below paragraph
Firstly
, all the countries have been badly affected by
plastic
substances.
Plastic
is a rapidly increasing and highly visible component of ocean
pollution
.
For example
,
plastic
pollution
threatens marine mammals, fish and sea birds. It breaks down into microplastic and nano
plastic
particles containing multiple manufactured chemicals that can enter marina organisms, including species consumed by humans. It can be controlled by banning
plastic
usage both on land and at sea. 
Likewise
, the Government should take necessary action against the people who use
plastic
because it is long-lasting.
Plastic
items can take hundreds of years to decompose.
This
trash poses dangers to both humans and animals.
Plastic
in any form should be avoided and
also
should stop the production immediately by all the Government for better living. In America
for instance
, has reduced air
pollution
by 70% by the passage of law Clean Air Act . They have saved almost thousands of lives. Government should spread awareness and take strict rules and laws for
plastic
usage.  In conclusion,
plastic
products need to be banned in all countries to improve the biodiversity of ocean
pollution
as well as the environment by spreading awareness of disadvantages caused by chemical substances and
also
the threats cause to the ocean kingdom
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