To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In general, there is a threat of having a scarcity of
food
with a rapidly increasing population globally and each country has to start making edible insects
as food
. However
, some people tend to believe that consuming insects
is not only unhealthy for people but will endanger the environment too. Despite of
having conclusions by people on Remove the preposition
apply
this
global topic, there are, indeed, have both benefits and drawbacks on it.
In
Change preposition
On
one
hand, Correct article usage
the one
insects
can give a vast variations
of nutrients to humans. Mostly, proteins Correct the article-noun agreement
vast variations
a vast variation
takes
the Change the verb form
take
first
place of it and even an average grasshopper have considerable
amount of protein. Add an article
a considerable
Hence
, start
making the use of edible Wrong verb form
starting
insects
as foods could definitely end world's
hunger, starting from Ethiopian countries. Another instance from Correct article usage
the world's
economical
perspective, certainly, high income can be made out of Add an article
an economical
this
since insect
farming does not take a huge space and resources. Therefore
, there are benefits for
using edible Change preposition
to
insects
as foods
.
Fix the agreement mistake
food
On the other hand
, insects
are not as much of cleanliness species as other animals we already consume by now and we cannot expect fully clean food
out an insect
body as well. For instance
, sometimes even ants have parasites within their body and unless we saw before cooking somehow, those parasite
won't Change the determiner
that parasite
those parasites
be even notice
to human eyes. Change the verb form
be even noticed
As a result
of that, humans after consuming edible insects
might end up having illnesses. Moreover
, even though Anthropoda, insects
kingdom is known to be the biggest in animal
kingdom so far, with the longterm edible Add an article
the animal
insect
consumption would be threatening to insect
population and those insects
related food
chain in the environment natural processes hugely.
In conclusion, there are equivalent reasons to think of from
both benefits and drawbacks Change preposition
apply
from
before Change preposition
apply
start
making edible Wrong verb form
starting
insects
as food
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