To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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with a rapidly increasing population globally and each country has to start making edible

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as

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, some people tend to believe that consuming

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is not only unhealthy for people but will endanger the environment too. Despite

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having conclusions by people on

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global topic, there are, indeed, have both benefits and drawbacks on it.

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hand,

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can give

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of nutrients to humans. Mostly, proteins

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place of it and even an average grasshopper have

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amount of protein.

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making the use of edible

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as foods could definitely end

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hunger, starting from Ethiopian countries. Another instance from

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perspective, certainly, high income can be made out of

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since

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farming does not take a huge space and resources.

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, there are benefits

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using edible

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as

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,

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are not as much of cleanliness species as other animals we already consume by now and we cannot expect fully clean

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out an

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body as well.

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, sometimes even ants have parasites within their body and unless we saw before cooking somehow,

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to human eyes.

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of that, humans after consuming edible

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might end up having illnesses.

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, even though Anthropoda,

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kingdom is known to be the biggest in

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kingdom so far, with the longterm edible

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consumption would be threatening to

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population and those

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related

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chain in the environment natural processes hugely. In conclusion, there are equivalent reasons to think of

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both benefits and drawbacks

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before

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making edible

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as

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