Some people say that newspaper are the best way to learn about current event, however other believe that they can learn news better from other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

I believe that
newspaper
is the best option to get interact with the modern world whereas other
people
are in the support of other media. I partially agree with the statement. It is true that
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always
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right
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information
about the things happening around the world.
That is
why
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of
people
read it in
a
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terms to get correct
information
, it is
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good
source
to improve the
information
and knowledge among the world, by sitting at home. I believe there are many advantages of reading
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.
for example
, reading
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. Because every
information
represented in a written form, it will definitely improve reading skills.
Although
, there
are
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other
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another source
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also
available
but
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because many
people
don't know how to use mobile apps they prefer to go with
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. Whereas other
people
believe that social media is the best
source
to get in touch with news and they can learn far better from
this
.Because It
also
provide
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the
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live
information
.
For instance
, Instagram. Various apps like Instagram provide
opportunity
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to see live news which gives the fastest updates. And
that is
why many
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prefer
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to use multimedia to increase their knowledge and stay uploaded. In my opinion, both
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and multimedia are the good
source
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which can provide
information
, but
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uh can be more beneficial for those who don't know how to use
mobile
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phone
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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