The internet provide us with information about life and culture of different countries and some people say it is not necessary to visit these countries to learn about them. To what extend do you agree and disagree with the statement? Give your opinion and relevant example.
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strongly concur that it is not necessary to visit any Correct your spelling
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Firstly
, In recent years the internet
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information
about any particular place, country
or culture
. People before the internet
have to travel Correct your spelling
different
diffrent
countries to get even basic Change preposition
to diffrent
information
but now that information
we can easily by just surfing few
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a few
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information
we can also
get real-time photos and videos of the same. Scientists around the globe can do detailed research about historical buildings, culture
and cities or languages. it is also
very convinet
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convenient
migrents
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information
about countries before they reach there for e.g before i
came Change the capitalization
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canada
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Canada
i
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the country
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like food,climate,festivals or famous food dishes.
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countries
On the other hand
, i
think technology comes with drawbacks because of the Change the capitalization
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internet
gap between human beings is increasing, people travel less around the world. rather than to visit any particular place they preferred to check on the internet
which LEDs to half information
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culture
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festivals and Correct your spelling
their
culture
.
To summarize this
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