You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Mr James, I am writing

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letter with regard to inform you about difficulties regarding current my accommodation. I would be grateful if you solve

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as soon as possible. I am from room number 7, Block B. The problem I am facing is that my roommate was playing video games loudly every evening sometimes until midnight.

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, he often phoned his friend so loudly in the middle of the night. I tried to request him to lower the voice or sound ,especially at night. But he still keeps on doing as usual. That noise is really stressful for me to concentrate on my studies and sleep. Sometimes I feel that I did not sleep enough and the

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day I cannot focus on my lesson because of

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. If it is possible, please transfer me to another room. I would prefer a single room or

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with a student who does not have

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type of attitude. I hope you understand my problems and look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Yan

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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