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Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer.

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In today's world, to decide which climate are better depends on one lifestyle of living. There are individuals who prefer living in hot
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, as well as one who prefers the opposite like cold
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.
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, despite the fact that those two types of climate have both benefits and drawbacks, I prefer to live in a country with hot
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. When it comes to the cold
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, the majority of
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 would think of a memorable festival
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 as Christmas Eve,
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 is not rather excessive to states that cold
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 encourages
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 these days to think more about amusive events.
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, a snowman, snow throwing, snow sliding, are symbolic events that
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 enjoy doing in a country with cold temperatures.
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, it is none of the exciting events to do with hot
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,
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 extremely feel moist and
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 leads to an unenjoyable moment. Granted hot
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 cannot encourage individuals to feel festive, it has another key method
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 as less cost of living and less sufferer of
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 to prove.
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,
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 who live in an area with high temperature has a broad range of dressing and it is
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 cheaper because it is no need for things like a hot pack, coats, and heaters.
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, as there are lots of
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 who cannot afford those crucial products, it causes a high risk for
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 to suffer from the cold
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 which can cause death.
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, I prefer the lifestyle in hot-climate countries rather than cold
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. To sum up,
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 in the country with cold
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 have fun activities.
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, living in high-temperature areas cause less living expenses and less volume of
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 who suffers from the
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. Because of that, I prefer to live in hot-
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 countries.
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