Some people believe that if a police officer carries a gun it can encourage a higher level of violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is an undeniable fact that
policemen
are trying hard to bring the maximum level of safety for the community. It is often argued that carrying guns
by police
officers would lead to a significant rise in violent actions
. However
, I firmly disagree with the given notion.
Apparently, all officers have guns
when on duties and this
holds a wide range of constructive benefits. To begin
with, policemen
should have all protective devices like guns
, since they always face dangerous people. In other words
, if the police
do not carry guns
, the criminals do not have anything to be afraid of, and this
definitely has a substantial contribution to raising the rate of crimes. As an instance, a police
guard arrived during a violent action in Tehran, all criminal men were arrested, and nobody was hurt. This
happened because police
are equipped with guns
; therefore
, either, they get arrested or they get hurt by guns
if they resist. As a consequence, police
and their guns
are the only reason that lawbreakers are being afraid of, and if they do not have guns
, the community should face dismal consequences.
Furthermore
, when violent actions
are taking place, police
protect themselves, and others with guns
and other equipment. They are completely educated about where and when they should use their guns
. Without a doubt, this
would be impossible to convince the gangs to stop their actions
without guns
. As an example, in Iran, a gang kidnapped many children from school to ask for money from their parents. The police
surrounded the area with a group of gunmen, and because of that, they gave up.
In conclusion, holding guns
by policemen
has reaped the benefits only, and this
cannot be the reason to rise the violent actions
. If they do not have guns
, this
will be followed by catastrophic effects for citizens and policemen
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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