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Summerise the information by selecting andreporting the main features and make comparisons where relevent.

The given line graph describes the information about
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 in various four nations namely Great Britain, Sweden, France and Canada over the ten year periods from 1990 to 1999, units are measured in thousands. Overall, it can be seen that clearly, Great Britain was the major highest
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 to compared other countries and France and Canada were had the same amount of vehicle
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 in the final period. According to the graph illustrates, in the initial period of the Uk had
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, with an average of 17000 and from 1990 to 1992, there was a slight rise in
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 from 17000 to 19000. In 1993,
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 figure was reduced gradually, which is around 16
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. Between 1993 and 1996,
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 was increased gradually by 16 to 20
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 and
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 was reduced marginally and reached 16000 at the end of the year. In 1990, Sweden had 6000 and
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 was increased gradually and in 1993
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 was peaked, which is around 16000, From 1993 to 1996, there was a steady level off and the
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 was increased slightly, with an average of 14000. In terms of France and Canada had the
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 in the initial period, which is around 7 and 8
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 respectively and these both were decreased slightly and reached in 1993, with an average of 6 and 5
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 sequentially. In 1999, in ,
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 both nations had the same amount of
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, which is around 6000.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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