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Some students work while studying. This often results in lack of time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

#students #work #results #lack #time #education #pressure
In
this
 generation
students
 are very mature and very fast they start earning money during class most of the
students
 during education they do the business
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as a result
 they can not Concentrate them class and They feel course pressure. In the
further
 ,essay I will discuss drawbacks and their solution To, begin Most of the admission Parents are not capable for them highest subjects that reasons Student go for earn money for family and class
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as a result
 They cannot manage both
study
 and job
this
 reason they take a lot of studies and
work
 pressure. As a
,
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result they go into depression or bad health and
also
 they can not Focus on their studies and they no complete their exercise and
also
 not complete the job
work
.For ,
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example most
students
 go abroad or out of state for
study
 they do
study
 and
work
 for their spending
also
 they do not care.
Secondly
, the Government need to run programs for
students
 government needs to give them examination scholarship and
also
 schools and colleges give that type of student special permission to
work
 and give him for
study
 flexible hour and teachers do not give application load. For, example All education departments give them
students
 permission to the job and give them some days in the week to application In conclusion, there are many problems with who admission they do .In my opinion education department or government take a good decision for
this
 type of enlistment and give them to permission to the activity and
also
 take care to do not disturb them survey
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